My Animatic - LONG VERSION possibly lol

Animatic - needs some explaining though.
- THe intro i whipped up together... but I want it to be really dark and dusty with just enough light to see the character... and the guy actually turns the key but he wasn't RIGGED.
- the sniper rifle shot - fitting the scope needs to be slightly longer and the look out the window needs to be a little shorter. (pre titles)
- the black just after the opening titles - is the hitman moving his eye into the scope of the gun.
- At 1 min u see a news report - hear it anyway and see pictures of our character and josh's text (previous post)
- at 1.24 - shot is a close up of the hitman moving his finger slowly to the trigger as he takes aim.
- at 1.38 - this shot is so long as he has to climb OVER the seat and then hide for a bit...before popping his head back up...and getting shot at again.
-at 2.02 - the same shot is used again however it would a few gun shots til they stop and then you hear footsteps outside.
When the hitman enters the motel - I would actually want the target to fall down when he throws the knife (error on my part) and the positioning of the target is off.
- the close up of the pistol is the 'click' as the hitman has no ammo.
- the close up of the hitman would be an :o supprised look and then the target is kind of still panicing. Hitman grabs a knife (from down his sock currently lol) and the target (prefarebly falls down)
Hitman reloads - target goes :O and looks away as the hitman approaches him... and then shuts his eyes.
Lightswitch on (but this would be done better than this shot - you'd see the gun being pointed then a quick swoop to the light switch with the gun
Target checks his body and then notices pile o' bodies (preferably right next to him!)

The rest you know.