The Big Monday

2 Min Scene – A story in miniature
Expo: Film Noir – post war Newspaper Office.
1A. Fist thumps paper – my turn to play ball (+)
1R. Hand stops globe – not while I pick team (-)
TP – Revelation: 2nd Kirk Douglas is revealed
2A. Not going to wait – Has a story in mind (+)
2R. Get back in line – threatens with sack (-)
3A So easy for you – threatens blackmail (+)
3R Editor gets up and grabs reporter (-)
TP Revelation 3rd Kirk Douglas revealed
Older reporter hands version to him (+)
Summed up. (+-)

Big Story:
Controlling Idea:
Success comes to those who play the system

Had Dave in On this Monday. Was useful to see another short however I fee;, the 'story preaches' are going unheard now and they are slightly unnecessary as we are all about to get into the modelling stage so that the animators can really get cracking on with their part and actually make it look half decent. No point in having a great story if the animation is not up to scratch. I'm pretty sure that our group is feeling slightly left out when it comes to Tutor time as we have been the last group to be seen two weeks running now. Maybe the tutors are confident in our work or maybe not. Either way it seems as though as its the end of the day no one really wants to hang around and speak to the last group. One week (our formative) everyone else got sheets filled out on where abouts they would be in terms of grades and at least 30 mins with Mike Smith, our group got 5-10 mins in TOTAL (spread across the 5 of us), no sheet or anything to relate to a grade or so we can see how we are doing. No look at the blog... Nudda. I hope we are doing ok but I think some of our group might not have enough evidence on the blog to get them a grade they deserve. Need to make sure everyone stays on top of all this. The week just gone we saw Mike and Dave this time but again being the last group we got them at 3:40 giving them as little time as possible to hear the story. Both didn't really say too much in terms of direction. Only thing we got told to do was to push the 'old' style in terms of old tvs and old buildings etc. Suppose that will help. Shall probably do some of that over the weekend. Will have to. Just wishing that we had some more outside opinions to be honest. May call on Dan Dalli yet again as I hear he's helping a number of other groups with their work.