Protector Version

Ok so we were discussing the idea that the hitman is actually trying to save our target rather than take him out. So... I shall attempt to script this roughly for you guys now... bare with me.

Opening Scene (still needs work) discussed possibly a bike riding by and then we focus on the window where you find the hitman peering through. Opening his suitcase and making himself at home in his abandoned apartment building he begins to assemble his rifle. Once the rifle he positions it poking out the window and begins to look through the scope to focus on the different windows across the road.
Finding the correct room he begins to zoom slightly more in on the target and begins to take aim.
Cutting away from the Hitman we now see our fat slob drinking a can of beer and we hear a wizz and a crack go by. Due to the volume of the tv (maybe some action sequence or football game) he doesn't realise anything at this point.
Cut back to the Sniper where we see him getting slightly agitaged and reloading as quick as he can taking aim and firing a couple more rounds off.
The sniper again looks through the eye piece and begins to look more frantic.
Cutting back to the fat slob (the target) still drinking his booze but this time he goes to take a swig and a bullet hits his can causing it to leak out EVERYWHERE all over him (could be difficult to animate).
Realising he's being targeted he ducks down in his seat then jumps to the window.
Poking his head round the corner more bullets come shooting from the hitmans gun.
From the hitmans perspective we see him really worried now and even more frantic in his reloading and shooting more and more often.

---Optional---Cutting back to the target we see him slide down the wall in dispair and fear. He peers out the window again to see our hitman running across the road with a pistol in his hand still shooting through the window 'at him'.

He smashes through the door/window only to point a gun at the target and let a few rounds off --- or throwing knife---
During this time our target scurrys back and lands on his butt (close up shot of face).
At this point we see his face looking down his body and his hands check his body if he has been hit when on his shoulder falls a hand.
Quick transition where he realises that theres a MASSIVE pile of bodies dressed in black with knives and silenced pistols etc. in the motel room just behind where he was sitting and hes now lying on these corpses.
He jumps up and grabs the hitmans arm in fear...LIKE A BABY.
*beep beep* PDA goes off and the hitman looks down and answers his PDA saying mission success. You've whack'd the final assassin sent to kill him.

Finale - body falls down from ceiling --- I don't think this should be in this position as we'll have to cut from a similar shot showing the bodies and then cut back to it after the PDA section... may need to loose the scene but I like it :( ---


*outtakes during full credits*
Body moves in the pile or someone gets cramp
Beer goes all over the guys face when qued to explode due to bullet coz someone shook it up (hitman) or one of the ninjas walks on going 'I SHOOK IT UP... I SHOOK IT'.
Hitman misses the assassin and hit the target with a rubber plastic knife or trips in the door way as he smashes it down.